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6. Though it is clear what the base should be, due to the following steps, the instructions are vague, and the picture gives little idea of what the paper and folds should be to accomplish it. A clearer picture would be very good.
9. "Go to the side again"? Which side? When were we there before? You could mean any number of different sides at this stage in the model, also picture is very poor.
10-11. Though the picture at stage 10 is very helpful, the instructions fail completely to convey how these steps are to be done, and the picture at stage 11 is hardly helpful. I suspect that this process is a very complex one and should have taken a number of steps to portray, or at least two.
In general you have skipped too far between each phase of the model, and have inadequately explained how to reach the next stage, leaving far too much room for something to go wrong. Ideally you should include a step for every time it is require to so much as crease the paper.
6. I know, I'm sorry I skipped the step for the waterbomb. I know you probably had no trouble doing that, but I see what you mean.
9. About this, I typed it wrong. It shouldn't say 'again', just 'go to the side'.
10-11. I understand what you mean. It probably would have been better to include more steps. When I said 'sail', don't forget that I said 'sail-like protusion', which goes with the picture next to it.
I'm sorry you've had difficulty with this, and I'm glad you've been trying to help. If you need help with any other instructions if you decide to continue, I'd be happy to help.